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Nagercoil

This article is an unbiased description of the place Nagercoil in Tamil Nadu, India.

• Object.

1. No references.
2. Lead section too short.
3. Several Manual of Style violations.
4. Population and Location sections one paragraph long.
5. Too POV (yes, it is biased) and poorly written;

There are several more places, which though not fully developed as tourist places, are very scenic and very beautiful (call it picture-postcard sceneries !) - this includes the Boothapandi area, near the town - popular with locals (especially youngsters - the ones with motor-cycles !!!)

«LordViD» 20:19, 22 December 2005 (UTC)

• Object. Missing references, parts of the article require more wikification and the 'places of interest' section is written awfully. The article would also be better with more photos, though these are not a requirement for a featured article. The inline citations need to be converted to Footnotes (see Wikipedia:Footnotes) and the lead could also be improved (See WP:Lead). Refer to peer review for more specific suggestions/comments. — Wackymacs 20:22, 22 December 2005 (UTC)
• Object -- poorly written. Please see wikipedia:Wikiproject Indian cities for ideas. Also check Wikipedia:Notice board for India-related topics for Indian city article that are featured articles. =Nichalp «Talk»= 04:17, 23 December 2005 (UTC)