Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Faten Hamama/archive1

I think that this article deserves to be a featured article now. It meets featured article criteria.

Comment Take my vote at face value, this is my first article to review... so I am open to feedback on my review. First, the third paragraph is nothing more than events and dates, this is not compelling reading---especially this early in an article. Why was her return received with "heed?" The first two sentences in the Controversy section need to be smoothed out. "her acting declined"---subjective decline or quantity of roles? Most of the references are websites. I'm not going to vote, but if I were it would probably be a weak object.Balloonman 05:19, 30 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Withdraw Please withdraw this nomination ASAP, as I still have work on the article. ← ANAS ^Talk? 07:29, 30 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]