Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Chetana Nagavajara/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Gog the Mild via FACBot (talk) 8 April 2024 [1].

Chetana Nagavajara

Nominator(s): Eevnnap (talk) 07:21, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Chetana Nagavajara is a Thai author and scholar in literature. He is an significant figure who connects introduce and connect European academic society with Thailand. As the professor and author who received multiple awards both domestic and internationally, Nagavajara built a legacy and created significant impact to multiple fields in Thai academic society. Eevnnap (talk) 07:21, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure about the content + sourcing, but at least the prose looks like it may need a substantial tune-up. (t · c) buidhe 01:38, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draken Bowser

There are issues with the prose even in the lead and they seem to continue throughout the body. Unfortunately, I don't think the article complies with GA-1a, and I'm going to oppose for that reason. I'm hoping the prose issues can be worked on, because I'd love to do a full review later. Draken Bowser (talk) 06:15, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

750h+

This is an oppose from me, unfortunately. But I will leave some quick comments:

The lead uses way too many unnecessary/unencyclopedic/excessively formal words such as "enriched" and "bestowed". (I hope I don't sound annoying but is this AI written?)
"His administrative acumen extended beyond the university campus, as he actively" Wikipedia presents to a general audience, and I doubt the majority of this general audience knows what "acumen" means.
There is not one picture.
"Chetana Nagavajara (Thai: เจตนา นาควัชระ RTGS: Chettana Nakwatchara), born 19 July 1937" should be changed to "Chetana Nagavajara (Thai: เจตนา นาควัชระ RTGS: Chettana Nakwatchara; born 19 July 1937)
Some of the sources do not seem reliable.

I highly recommend you take this to WP:GOCE or WP:PR because this definitely does not comply with WP:FACR (unfortunately, I don't think it even complies with some of the WP:GAC). I do believe this article has the potential to be featured though. Best and best of luck, 750h+ | Talk 15:31, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It seems clear that a consensus not to promote has formed, and so I shall be archiving it. I commend 750h's parting advice to the nominator. This one can get there, but it needs a fair bit of work. The usual two-week hiatus will apply. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:47, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:47, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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