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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Buidhe via FACBot (talk) 28 December 2021 [1].

Abdollah Mirza Qajar

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Nominator(s): Amir Ghandi (talk) 13:01, 7 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about Abdollah Mirza Qajar, an Iranian prince of Qajar dynasty, son of Fath-Ali Shah Qajar and governor of the city of Zanjan. in his time, he built the Jameh Mosque of Zanjan, discovered the long lost tomb of Arghun, Ilkhan of Ilkhanate and had a meeting with James Edward Alexander a Scottish traveller. he however, eventually lost the governorship due to the complains from the peasants. he once tried to regain his power when his father died and the realm was left upon Abdollah's nephew, Mohammad Shah Qajar, but faild. since then he left the government jobs and spent time with scholars and writers in the capital Tehran until his death in 18 June 1846 which he foretold earlier.

The article has been through copy edit and peer review and i firmly believe it is ready to jump up the final phase. Amir Ghandi (talk) 13:01, 7 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Image review

  • Don't repeat caption in alt text
    • Changed the caption
  • File:Abdullah_Mirza_Dara.jpg needs a US tag, and can the summary be translated?
  • File:Jemeh_mosque_Zanjan.jpg: as Iran does not have freedom of panorama, this will need a tag for the original work.
    • Done (I think?)

Nikkimaria (talk) 13:40, 7 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Funk

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  • I'd like to have a look, but at a glance, it looks unusually short for an article about a historial figure? Are the sources scarce, or are there omissions? FunkMonk (talk) 18:04, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    • There is a good amount of material about him the problem is that apart from the sources used in the article, most of them are primary sources
What are these sources? And if there are secondary sources that deal with those sources, it should be covered. Otherwise there might be a comprehensiveness issue, but hard to say since I don't know the scope of the literature about him. FunkMonk (talk) 13:57, 23 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Historical Chronicles written by Qajar era historians in which the amount that secondary sources cover were added into the article, however, some things were left out tat i guess is due to the problem of credibility. but its not anything significant, namely, the details of the fate of his children.
I saw that during an earlier review, a lot of "further reading" sources were removed, nothing in those that could be used here for expansion? FunkMonk (talk) 19:03, 25 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
There was something that i wish could remain, it was about a historical drama book based of the discovering of the Ilkhan's tomb.
  • There is a good deal of WP:duplinks, that can be highlighted with this[2] script.
    • The repeated links were delinked
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