Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/2022 Tour Championship/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Ian Rose via FACBot (talk) 20 June 2023 [1].

2022 Tour Championship

Nominator(s): User:HurricaneHiggins, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:44, 7 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about the 2022 edition of the Tour Championship. The event takes the best eight players and puts them against each other for a massive prize over long frames just before the World Snooker Championship. Neil Robertson won six frames in a row in the final to win <the event for a second time. This is a part of the Featured Topic on the Tour Championship as all prior events are FA. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:44, 7 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That's a good article. I think the overall description of the 2022 Tour Championship went well. In particular, it is good to deal with details about the schedule, venue, and participants of the event. In addition, I think the reliability of the article has been increased by using accurate sources.--CHO woohyuck (talk) 07:23, 22 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Coordinator note

This has been open for more than three weeks and has yet to pick up a support. Unless it attracts considerable movement towards a consensus to promote over the next three or four days I am afraid that it will have to be archived. Gog the Mild (talk) 15:56, 29 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Of course. Sorry been not too well. I shall see if I can drum up interest. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:28, 30 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry but this one has been a bit of a non-starter so will archive shortly. Given the relative lack of commentary I'm prepared to waive the usual two-week pause before a re-nom but it sounds like a break might be in order anyway, and why not? Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 07:56, 20 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"was the third and final event in the 2021–22 Cazoo Cup series, first introduced in the 2018–19 snooker season" - the 2021-22 series wasn't introduced in 2018-19. Suggest "was the third and final event in the 2021–22 edition of the Cazoo Cup, a [competition/tournament/concept/some other appropriate word] first introduced in the 2018–19 snooker season"
"guaranteeing that he would win the Cazoo Cup, regardless of the outcome of the final, having won the Players Championship and been runner-up in the World Grand Prix, the other two Cazoo Series events" - are the Cazoo Cup and the Cazoo Series the same thing?
"O'Sullivan became the first player to make five century breaks in two consecutive matches" - maybe "O'Sullivan became the first player to make five century breaks in each of two consecutive matches" so it doesn't sound like you are saying he made a total five centuries across the two matches
Think that's it! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:22, 1 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Lee Vilenski: I thought a ping might be helpful.--N Ø 19:17, 17 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, was taking a mental health break. I am back, shall take a look at the above comments shortly. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:48, 18 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Media review - pass

Images appear to be properly licensed.--N Ø 08:23, 9 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Oh, ideal. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:48, 18 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Ian Rose (talk) 07:58, 20 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.