Wikipedia:Featured Article Help Desk/Requests/Magic: The Gathering

Magic: The Gathering (Talk, Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Magic: The Gathering/archive1)

This page needs style help. There's no (or very little) problems with facts, but many passages are confusing to read and do a poor job of explaining the subject. A further complication is that all of the editors are well-versed in the subject material, and have a hard time seeing confusing parts. Khaim 23:53, 18 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

After reviewing the FAC listing for the article, and the article itself, I will concur that this needs some work. Perhaps if you could invite a few of the article's other main contributors along to help discuss what does need doing...? I'll also check through and see which of our participants fits this one best. Rob Church ^{Talk | FAHD} 21:11, 24 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]