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Student articles needing cleanup:

Alwasat (Bahraini newspaper)

[1]
[2] <-- very nice.

California Smog Check Program

Removed about 50% as unref'd, see [3]
Copied unref'd to talk page; can be added back w/ refs if possible
Cleaned [4] -> [5]


Conservation Effects Assessment Project

needs lists turned into prose

Excessive bail

I have done some. It needs references badly. Doff

Native American Fish and Wildlife Society Done all I could stomach: Diff

Totally unreferenced, so it's hard to justify investing any more time in it for now.
Changed to 'unreferenced'
Per above - unref'd...can't do anything. Needs rewriting from sources, obv


Telecommunications policy of the United States this article seems as if it was intentionally padded for length. *** COPYVIO *** ? e.g. google "Telecommunications policy is concerned with the" "deemed essential that we have in place a dedicated network" +close paraphrase e.g. [6]

[7] (Dec 9, 2010, verbatim copy)

  • Needs thorough check of copyvio / close-paraphrasing; some may predate current edits
  • that explains why the writing seemed terribly inconsistent


United Nations Foundation

Utility-possibility frontier

Someone more knowledgeable on economics should probably read this over in a bit

Added some refs; honestly I'm too tired to learn this :P

Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Economics#Utility-possibility_frontier