User talk:Zverevab/sandbox

Peer review

In general, the organization of the sections is a bit unclear. It is better to have a central heading and indicate the relationships among different levels of heading. The organization of headings will help the readers quickly identify the topic of the article. However, the contents of the different sections do provide the readers with enough information about the topic, and the languages and tones that are being used appear to be neutral. The citations are used properly, and the sources are either from scientific papers or company reports, which are all reliable sources. Thanks for editing this article. I really enjoy reading it! Good luck!
Oski999 (talk) 23:37, 27 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Response to peer review

Thanks for your input! I tried to make the headings as clear as possible. Zverevab (talk) 00:23, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]