User talk:Zoeyge/Bruyerre
Hi Zoey !
I have read your translation and I thought it was pretty good ! :) Even though I have a few suggestions:
- Maybe we can say "chocolatery" in English too but I think it would be better to put chocolate factory. - I also would replace food sector by food industry - and just put "his daughter and sons in law" into brackets.
Like I said, I think you did a great job and my suggestions are mainly details... :)