User talk:YTCAO17
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 03:56, 14 February 2017 (UTC)
Critiquing an article (Homework)
[edit]The link for An Qingxu is below: [[1]]
This article is located in the Start row and Low importance. I read it several times and checked the reference, and found several problems.
1. The reference 1 is not effective. It redirected me to the website of Academia Sinica instead of to an article or a book where gives the time. So I think this should be corrected.
2. In the part "Under An Lushan's rule", the first paragraph is irrelevant to An Qingxu, I think it can be described by one sentence that An Lushan's first son was executed by Tang Dynasty due to his rebellion. This gives sufficient support to the statement that An Qingxu would be the crown prince.
3. The part "As Emperior" should give more details about the changes of An Qingxu's situation.
4. The conversation in last paragraph is unnecessary.
5. Personal information lacks information of his brothers and sisters. This is important because his brothers are mentioned in the article and is revelant to him.
Yuntengcao (talk) 01:45, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
Topic
[edit]The Silk has been used as textile for thousands of years. This is what the Wikipedia article talks about. But it has gained much attention recently for its applications in biomaterials, which are missing in the Wikipedia article Silk.
several keywords for google scholar search: silk, biomaterials, tissue engineering I will write this article according mainly to the review papers.
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2699289/ https://www.elsevier.com/books/silk-biomaterials-for-tissue-engineering-and-regenerative-medicine/kundu/978-0-85709-699-9
SOUNDS GOOD, YUN. --ERIC EricGrunwald (talk) 21:50, 4 April 2017 (UTC)