User talk:Yukkkkk

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Urban Architecture of Fiji (June 6)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AngusWOOF was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The tone of some of this writeup is promotional, with peacock phrases "beautifully designed" and "unique local style"

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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 21:08, 6 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Yukkkkk! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 21:08, 6 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Urban Architecture of Fiji (September 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by RoySmith were:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

@AngusWOOF: I get what you're saying about possibly making this part of Culture of Fiji, but I think there's enough here to justify a stand-alone article.

The bigger problem is the style of writing. I don't think this is bad enough to bring WP:G11 into play, but this really doesn't read like an encyclopedia article. I suspect if this were moved to mainspace and somebody brought it to AfD, the result would be to send it right back to draftspace for major editing.

As just one particularly egregious example, The architecture in Fiji is a potent example of the perfect balance between locale styles and foreign styles. I hate to point out any particular passage, however, because that leads to the impression that if that particular passage were dropped, then it would be OK. I don't want to give that impression. This really needs a lot of rewriting work.

There's also some minor copy-paste that needs to be fixed, see the earwig report for details.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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-- RoySmith (talk) 15:32, 28 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Urban Architecture of Fiji concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Urban Architecture of Fiji, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:22, 29 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]