User talk:YouDubStudent/Fate: The Cursed King

Link to the peer review. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:YouDubStudent/Fate:_The_Cursed_King/Grizzbuzz_Peer_Review Grizzbuzz (talk) 20:33, 31 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on your article

I looked at the work you've done and you've really added a ton of text. The new references (especially the PC gamer link) is good. Good work on all that. I think there is still some work to do:

I think it's typical to use italics or similar when you refer to the name of the game in the text of the article. You should look at other high quality video game articles on Wikipedia to get a sense of what folks are looking for here.
I think there is some information which is likely not really appropriate for an article like this. For example, system requirements seem to have a lot of detail that are likely not typical. As I said in person, check out other high quality (Featured or Good class) video game articles and try to emulate what they include. I think this will likely involve removing some of the text here so it's more matter-of-fact and more focused on the material that a person coming to a encyclopedia article would be looking for.
The tone feels a little informal. I'd edit for that.

I think these edits will likely mean editing down what you've written so that it's a little more efficient, a bit shorter, etc. That's totally fine. This is about quality, not quantity.

When you've finished a pass, you should contact myself and/or User:Altsalt and we'll take a look at it before you giving you a final "go-ahead" for making this article live. —mako ๛ 23:02, 12 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Benjamin Mako Hill I made the changes you recommended. Let me know if I am ready to go live. Thank you YouDubStudent (talk) 23:23, 14 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@YouDubStudent: I've done an edit of the draft. You can take a look at the changes. In any case, I think it's good to go!

You should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is a helpful set of ideas from altsalt. Many won't apply but some might. Do a final pass and try to address any of the things on the list on our website that you think are useful and would improve things. Then go ahead and make it live. Good work! Thanks so much for your work on this article! —mako ๛ 05:05, 16 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]