User talk:Yoo Youngkuk

This is your Talk page, not a drafting page; format fixes needed

Your draft is at Draft:Yoo Youngkuk, please do not copy your draft here, we need this page to converse with you.

There are a few format fixes you need to make at Draft:Yoo Youngkuk:

Do not number sections, the Table of Contents will organize them automatically for you since you're correctly using the "==" coding
Do not use sub-sections "===" in place of sections "=="; use two "=" first, then only use three if you're making a subsection
Do not bold anything except for the very first appearance of his name, so don't bold section headings, the coding makes section headings automatically.
Instead of just typing the "basic facts" at the top of the article, go to Template:Infobox artist and use the coding shown there to organize it into a nice clear "infobox" that holds the facts

Another reviewer will be alone to comment on structural and content issues, I'm just here to give some basic advice on format. Please neaten up the format, and that will make it easier to finish guiding your article. Thanks! MatthewVanitas (talk) 03:27, 21 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Explaining

I patrolled your page. I went through the enormously-backlogged list of newly-created pages and confirmed that your page was okay: not spam, not an attack page, not a copyright violation, not any of the other reasons for which I would delete someone's page without asking. Then I clicked "patrolled" to remove it from the list of "pages that have not yet been patrolled", and moved on to the next entry. That's all. DS (talk) 13:06, 24 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Yoo Youngkuk has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Yoo Youngkuk. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 04:41, 1 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Username

You need to change your username. It is that of a real dead person. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:42, 1 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yoo Youngkuk (December 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft has tone issues, and is written in a non-neutral tone. "is still regarded as a role model for many artists because of his persistent pursuit of unique art world and the work ethic he showed as an artist" in the voice of Wikipedia is peacock language. If a critic has said this, quote them.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Yoo Youngkuk and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Robert McClenon (talk) 04:45, 1 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Yoo Youngkuk, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 04:45, 1 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yoo Youngkuk has been accepted

Yoo Youngkuk, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Missvain (talk) 07:59, 11 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]