User talk:Yocha001/sandbox
Hey Tiffany. The summary and background content is pretty good, but there some sentences that could be made clearer. For instance, the one starting with Due. Maybe split into two? Also, I think it would be good to reference the article with a hyperlink and not just the name. Lastly, maybe a blurb about current research and how its' has progressed since the Hallmarks of Aging review. Good start and good luck editing :)
-Yukna
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