User talk:Yeon Jae Hwang
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[edit]Hello, Yeon Jae Hwang, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:28, 9 October 2024 (UTC)
Intersectional Solidarity
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Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. A page you recently created, Intersectional Solidarity, may not conform to some of Wikipedia's guidelines for new pages, so it has been moved to where you can continue to work on it. Please consider using the Article Wizard or the Articles for Creation procedure. For more information about creating articles, you may want to read "Your first article". You may also want to read our introduction page to learn more about contributing. Thank you. :Jay8g [V•T•E] 08:00, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
Intersectional solidarity
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I made a few edits to your intersectional solidarity article to make the layout conform a bit better to Wikipedia's guidelines. I recommend you read pages 7-9 of the Editing Wikipedia brochure that I've linked here, to get a better sense of how things should look.
In particular, your article needs a lead section that summarizes all the main points of the article, in proportion to how they are covered in the article.
You should also try to make the language of the article more accessible. As it stands, it's overly technical. Keep in mind that Wikipedia should be accessible to the average person, and that many of the people who read Wikipedia in English speak English as their second language. So simpler and clearer writing is always better. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:34, 3 December 2024 (UTC)