User talk:Yellow Martin/sandbox
Peer Review
[edit]You stated you will be improving an article on savaging but failed to provide the link to this Wikipedia article in your sandbox. This would be an appropriate thing to do so others will know exactly what article you are referring to. This article, (the one I'm assuming), includes a fairly strong lead section. It is lacking any other sections, though you mentioned that you will be adding sections on important topics that should be discussed, great choices. You failed to mention any reliable sources discussing the topic and the existing Wikipedia article could use more. Also, maybe you could consider mentioning the evolutionary significance of savaging? Just an idea. It's always useful to understand the evolutionary aspect to certain behaviours. Over all, great start! I look forward to reading your final draft.
Response to Review
[edit]My apologies for not providing the link however if you look at the class list page where it lists what topics we have all chosen, beside my name is the link! My sources were listed on the talk page of the savaging article. I will definitely look into the evolutionary significance of savaging. Thank you for the suggestion! Yellow Martin (talk) 22:00, 30 October 2017 (UTC)