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Hello, Yedlo, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:26, 30 March 2021 (UTC)

_________ Hi Yedlo. To start off I thought that your info box on the right side was well done with all of the important information displayed. Personally saying "preceded by Ajax..." wasn't clear that Ajax Penumbra was a prequel novel, so I suggest clarifying by using a different word choice. Secondly, the lead to your page is interesting as it explains the plot, historical context as to how the author got the idea for the book, as well as the book's accomplishments. Perhaps it would be beneficial to provide a fully done synopsis in another section. Also, I think it would be best to go into further detail on why the author misreading the sign for a 24 hour bookstore gave him the idea for the book. The sources used are credible as well as varied.Relevant terms have been hyperlinked to other wikipedia pages which is good. Overall it's a solid start and with proper structure, the following content should come easy.