User talk:Yc19990311
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== Thanks to Qiandaizi and Arjayay for helping me correct my contribution.Yc19990311 (talk) 13:26, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
You have an overdue training assignment.
[edit]Please complete the assigned training modules. --Qiandaizi (talk) 15:15, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
You have an overdue training assignment.
[edit]Please complete the assigned training modules. --Qiandaizi (talk) 13:56, 22 September 2020 (UTC)
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Min-Fan1 (talk) 21:58, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
First of all, I think you did a great job with the introduction, telling the reader succinctly what you are presenting. Your introductory section is very concise and clear, I will learn this from you as I write mine with long introductory sections! And for your content, your structure is detailed, so the reader knows at a glance what you will be presenting. Additionally, your content added relevant to your topic. And then， the image you show is very good, and below the picture also explains the basic information about Hu Shih， so I will also do this in my article. However, I think you're getting a little too detailed in categorizing your content. I would suggest that you could add some more content t represent the story of Hu Shih's life, as the existing content is all about HuShih's connections to other people and things, and perhaps you could spend a little more general content about Hu Shih himself. All in all, you did a great job.
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Please do not introduce links in actual articles to user pages or sandboxes, as you did at New Culture Movement, Zhang Shizhao and Hu Shih. Since these pages have not been accepted as articles, user pages, sandboxes and drafts are not suitable for linking in articles. and such links are contrary to the Manual of Style. These links have been deleted, please do not re-add any such links, thank you - Arjayay (talk) 15:00, 27 November 2020 (UTC)