User talk:Yasmejia/sandbox

Yasmejia’s peer review

The article seems to have a neutral tone. It talks about other minor topics but those topics are usually illustrations of how they are connected to HIV/AIDS. For example in 1900, the article talks about Ryan White dying from Pneumonia but this disease was found to be related to AIDS. The article bears more weight on some sub-topics. For instance, there seem to be more information in years like 1959, 1979 and 1980 whiles years like 1920, 1960 and 1964 have little information. The article’s subtopics started from 1900 to 1920 and then to 1959, and so on. There were wide gaps between the years. Does that mean there was no AIDS epidemic within the years that are not discussed? --Wina45 (talk) 16:07, 10 November 2017 (UTC)