User talk:Yarinashen/sandbox

Peer Review 1

Hi Yanru,

I will be reviewing your article for your topic.

I like your comparison of the French language and Haitian Creole, although I think that if you go in more detail about the similarities and differences. Your description of the language use under certain social circumstances is really interesting and all your citation all in date and your links work as well. The article is neutral and informative, but I think the French topic is a little bit irrelevant to the language you are describing. I am expecting to see more language development and acquisition in your section of history and educational role. Overall, I think you have a good start, keep moving and good luck!

best,

Huixing

Thanks for your feedback Huixing! I'll try to find more example of the grammar differences between French and Haitian Creole. I agree that French is a bit irrelevant to HC, but in order to create a more holistic understanding of its sociolinguistic role I have to add in parts about French as the two languages both play important roles in the Haitian society. But I'll try to reduce the proportion of French. Again thanks for your comments! Yarinashen (talk) 00:08, 30 July 2017 (UTC)