User talk:Woodycolahan/sandbox

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@Woodycolahan: Nice work on your draft. One thing this needs is better sections - right now, the article isn't broken down into sections at all. I've linked to the "Editing Biographies" brochure that outlines the typical sections.

The content that you didn't add has problems as well - it could use a lot more sources. If the sources you're using can support claims made in other parts of the article, it would be helpful to add them. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:34, 16 July 2019 (UTC)