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Welcome!

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Hello, Winwiwil123, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few links to pages you might find helpful:

You may also want to complete the Wikipedia Adventure, an interactive tour that will help you learn the basics of editing Wikipedia. You can visit the Teahouse to ask questions or seek help.

Please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask for help on your talk page, and a volunteer should respond shortly. Again, welcome! --Teetee taw (talk) 14:10, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 01

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Please complete online student training at https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students You must login and complete all five basic modules. (Wikipedia policies, ..., Finding your article) After completion of these module, we will be able to see that you have edited at least three pages on the English Wikipedia.

Special:Contributions/Winwiwil123 at this time shows that you have not finished:

  • sandbox [1] (N.B. Please do not click "Submit your draft for review!". The function is not applicable to our course.)
  • be bold [2]
  • talk page tutorial [3]

You need to be logged in on a desktop platform, so that your contributions are recorded under your account. The links above take you straight into the pages where you can launch interactive tutorials. We expect to see you create three new pages during the this training exercise. --Teetee taw (talk) 14:10, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Teetee taw (talk) 13:50, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 02

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General instruction
  • You are going to see history of pages on Wikipedia to learn how volunteers collaboratively develop content and media. We would like you to learn from the edits made by our students in the past terms. The list of terms, students and articles can be found at user:Taweetham/WEP.
  • All tasks must be answered by using Special:Diff. See Help:Diff for further detailed instructions and see an example below
Tasks
  1. Read WP:NOT. Find an example of student edit on an article AND warning message that the student received on his/her talk page.
  2. Read Wikipedia:Edit warring. Find an example of student edits on an article (it requires several edits to be an edit warring) AND warning that the student received on his/her talk page.
  3. Read WP:COPYVIO. Find an example of a student who has been warned about it on his/her talk page. Find an example (Wikipedia diff on an article) where copyrighted media (image, VDO or sound files) is deleted from Wikimedia Commons and removed from an article.

Please leave your answer below. (Leave a reply in this section of your talkpage.) --Teetee taw (talk) 13:50, 21 September 2019 (UTC) Task 1 An example of student edit: Special:Diff/781850684/824735633 A warning message that the student received: Special:Diff/823761076/824920490 Task 2 Here is an example of an edit made by Myat T. Aung on the article Toxicology Special:Diff/636831004/634705830 Here is an example of an edit warning on Myat T. Aung talk page Special:Diff/636835165/636805545 Task 3 An example of a student who have been warned about the copyright violation; Special:Diff/786345747 An example where copyrighted media is deleted from Wikimedia common and removed from the an article; Special:Diff/689438940 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Winwiwil123 (talk • contribs) 05:59, 28 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 10:01, 29 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 03

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Please propose a topic or two that you wish to write on Wikipedia. You should read all related articles/policies on Wikipedia and provide the following information.

  1. Your proposed article(s) (New or existing STUB article relating to a chemical compound, reaction, equipment or technique - or related to your major/interest. (see Category:Stub-Class Chemistry articles))
    • For new article, explain briefly why it passes WP:NOTE.
    • For existing topics, explain briefly the state/structure of the current article.
      • Is the structure & existing content appropriate?
        • If not, restructure or remove content as per WP:MOS and WP:NOT before you move to the next stage.
  2. Brief outline of your contributions to the article
    • In what section & what content
      • Make sure it belongs to the article and it is encyclopedic. See WP:NOT for things that should NOT be added.
      • Make sure that it is not redundant to existing articles. Use Google search "site:wikipedia.org" rather than Wikipedia search.
    • References for the article
    • Media files (photo/VDO/drawing) to be used in the article.
      • You may suggest plan to create your own work and upload to Wikimedia Commons
      • You may use existing media on Wikimedia Commons. Use Google image search "site:wikimedia.org" rather than Wikimedia Commons search.
  3. Examples/template/related articles that you will use as a model to develop your nominated article.
    • In terms of WP:MOS/formatting - your article will have similar style/format/tone to these articles.
    • In terms of content - your article will link to or will be linked from these articles.

Please leave your answer below. (Leave a reply in this section of your talkpage.) --Taweetham (talk) 10:01, 29 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  1. My proposed topic (Existing topic) Bond_energy.
    • The state of the current article seems incomplete because the article does not have picture and calculation method of Bond strength.
      • The content seems appropriate.
  2. A brief outline of the contribution to the article.
    • I will add picture and some other formula such as ΔH = ∑ ΔH(bonds broken) - ∑ ΔH(bonds formed).
    • I will add a new section to show how to calculate Bond Enthalpy which is energy to break bond and some of examples .
    • Also, I will add table form and other pictures to make this topic become more understandable.
    • References
      • March,Jerry(1985), Advanced Organic Chemistry: Reactions, Mechanisms, and Structure (3rd ed.), New York: Wiley, ISBN 0-471-85472-7
      • IUPAC, Compendium of Chemical Terminology, 2nd ed. (the "Gold Book") (1997). Online corrected version: (2006–) "Bond energy (mean bond energy)". doi:10.1351/goldbook.B00701
  3. My article will be similar format/ style to this article:

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Winwiwil123 (talk • contribs) 07:25, 1 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 09:59, 6 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 04

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Your topic is approved and added to the course page. Please develop the proposal into the first draft in your sandbox.

  • For existing article, you may copy some parts of the existing article to your sandbox to see how revision/integration of content would work. You will copy the code back to the article at later stage.
  • For new article, you may want to copy parts of a template article to your sandbox to see what sections are necessary. The sandbox will be moved to the article namespace at later stage. Please do not click "Submit your draft for review!". The function is not applicable to our course.

In all cases, do not copy more than what is necessary. For example, do not copy any categories to your sandbox. --Taweetham (talk) 09:59, 6 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

As we discussed earlier today, please note that your article is not the same as bond-dissociation energy. -Taweetham (talk) 10:29, 8 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
 Not done You sandbox is not in format that is ready to be moved to the article. Please do proper inline citation for your work and see if this is a positive addition to the existing article. You have 24 hr for re-submission. --Taweetham (talk) 15:21, 12 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
If you need any help with this please let me know asap. --Taweetham (talk) 12:46, 14 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 22:12, 16 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 05

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Your work has been reviewed. Majority of the content/formatting is ok. Please carefully move encyclopedic part of your sandbox to article namespace so that the general public can see it. Here are some tips to help you complete the transition to online editing.

  1. Content/Formatting policies
  2. Technicalities
    • Unlike sandbox, all edits will be public immediately and it is important to make sure that all of your edits are acceptable. You may use preview button and provide edit summary to help you.
    • Any "page save" on Wikipedia even outside article namespace is permanently recorded and can be retrieved by the public. Please think carefully before you click save and before you revert other people edits. No work is lost but only the latest version of the page is shown to the public. Deletion of pages (or versions of pages) is only possible by admins if it falls under Wikipedia:Deletion policy. You can request admins to do deletion or other prescribed tasks should the need arises.
    • You may want to set watchlist and notifications so that you can catch up with changes made to your article and your talk page by other editors.
  3. Community interactions
    • You will be interacting with other volunteers when you make edits on the article namespace. Please respect other users in the community and assume good faith.
    • If your work is reverted or modified in any other ways, do not engage in a edit war. Rather use discussion page of your article to settle issues.
    • You may be blocked from Wikipedia for failure to observe community rules.

We hope you enjoy seeing product of your hard work read by many people in the years to come. --Taweetham (talk) 22:12, 16 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Bond_energy Here is the link — Preceding unsigned comment added by Winwiwil123 (talk • contribs) 11:29, 18 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Can you do the cleanup by merging the Notes section into References section. BTW, generally, external links should not be in the content of the article. You should create table(s) and/or figure(s) by yourself and refer to these links in References section. --Taweetham (talk) 01:22, 20 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for revising the article. Please see Talk:Bond energy if you can address issues raised there. I can demonstrate to you how to create tables and equations in person. Also, the in line external links have yet to be removed from the article. --Taweetham (talk) 01:59, 24 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I have answered some of their questions. I created table already but dont no if it is okay or not. I wrote equation already dont no if it will work as well. I have removed external links already and move it to reference section already. Winwiwil123 (talk) 14:39, 24 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

You have made a very good attempt at this. I am delighted to see your progress. This is probably the best of four students at this point but it may be to early to make a conclusion. Please learn from comments in the history of your page and see what others have done in addition to your changes to make your work acceptable to Wikipedia's standard. --Taweetham (talk) 05:25, 27 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 05:25, 27 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 07

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For your information, the grading is based on the criteria below: Wikipedia contributions must meet the minimum quantity requirement to be graded.

Quantity
  • We generally expect at least 5,000 characters (counted by xtools's authorship attribution) to the assigned article unless you upload media file(s) and/or help contribute to classmate article(s).
  • If media are created by you, uploaded to the Wikimedia Commons and used in the article, either 1,000 or 2,000 or 3,000 characters credit will be given, regardless of the number of media uploaded.
    • 1,000 characters credit will be given to sound files(s).
    • 1,000 characters credit will be given to image(s).
    • 2,000 characters credit will be given to video(s).
  • If you help classmate(s) to edit their articles or create media files for uses in classmates' articles, up to 1,000 bytes of your contributions may be counted. Your classmate(s) must remain in the Wikipedia assignment program at the end of the term so that the articles can be counted.
  • All of the work must be created by you and recorded under your username.
  • No outstanding WP:COPVIO issues for both text and media.

The work will be graded based on quality and process criteria:

Quality

Learn from similar articles on Wikipedia (preferably higher quality than the article you are working on).

  • Structure
  • Content
    • All information are relevant to the article and written in encyclopedic tone. (Understand WP:NOT.)
    • Text are clearly supported by reliable sources. (Follow WP:REF.)
    • Do final clean up and proofreading.
  • Formatting & housekeeping
    • Formatting (citation e.g. {{cite web}}}, {{cite journal}} and {{cite book}}, heading styles, bullet/numbered point, font face, table, position/layout/caption of images etc.)
    • Other issues (course tag on talk page of your article, make sure you add categories to your article(s) and media)
    • File names in Wikimedia commons or reference name in the article should be sensible and helpful for other editors.
    • Unnecessary files, pages e.g. redirection are nominated for deletion.
    • To produce desired formatting, learn from source codes of other articles on Wikipedia or ask classmates/other Wikipedians.
Process
  • Complete the assignment on time.
  • Understand Wikipedia articles and policies by independent reading.
  • Take appropriate action on comments given by the community/instructor.
  • Provide edit summary for every edit on the article namespace.
  • If conflict arises, do not engage in edit war. Use talk page/discussion pages to resolve the issue.
  • Help improve classmates' articles.
  • Thank other editors/reviewers of your article.

--Taweetham (talk) 05:25, 27 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 08

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Hi Winwiwil123! The image you added seems to come from a the article [4]. This is WP:COPYVIO and it should be deleted from Wikimedia commons. It seems to me that you have added enough content but you need to reorganize the article to be coherent and consistent. An easy example is kJ/mol or kcal/mol - either is correct but SI is preferred and you should use one unit for the whole article. --Taweetham (talk) 06:49, 3 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I took care of deleting that copyvio image on commons. DMacks (talk) 05:45, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@DMacks: Thank you for taking care of this on Commons and in the article [5]. Winwiwil123, WP:COPYVIO is the most serious violation and I will not tolerate it. --Taweetham (talk) 02:58, 5 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
You're welcome! Let me know if there are any other admin tasks you need either here (en.wp) or commons for your students. DMacks (talk) 03:46, 5 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 09

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Hi Winwiwil123! Are we settled on the content or you wish to add anything further? --Taweetham (talk) 02:02, 15 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I am ok with my content. But you can request me to add more information any time. Winwiwil123 (talk) 03:17, 15 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 10

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You are now assigned a mentor SoonLorpai (talk · contribs). --Taweetham (talk) 06:23, 16 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 11

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@SoonLorpai: Your mentor will provide detailed feedback in the next few days. I have identified a number of problems at this point:

  1. You have not updated the article since November 4, 2019.

Done Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:09, 27 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  1. Do you understand the convention for variable to be italic and descriptive text to be subscript normal text? Please study the convention and apply this consistently. I made examples at the top of the article for you.

Done Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:09, 27 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  1. Chemical formula such as CO2 should be CO2.

Done Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:09, 27 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  1. Homolytic cleavage should be added to the context of the first few paragraph of the article.

Done Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:09, 27 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  1. Fix the kcal or kJ issue and the confusion template.

Done Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:09, 27 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  1. The three sections at the end of the article should be rewritten. I do not see connection between them and within each section the writing is still not logical.

Done Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:09, 27 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

--Taweetham (talk) 08:52, 23 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This is a reminder that you have not complete the assignment. Please complete it as soon as possible to remain in our program. --Taweetham (talk) 08:36, 25 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

October 2019

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Information icon Hello. Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia.

When editing Wikipedia, there is a field labeled "Edit summary" below the main edit box. It looks like this:

Edit summary (Briefly describe your changes)

I noticed your recent edit to Bond energy does not have an edit summary. Please be sure to provide a summary of every edit you make, even if you write only the briefest of summaries. The summaries are very helpful to people browsing an article's history.

Edit summary content is visible in:

Please use the edit summary to explain your reasoning for the edit, or a summary of what the edit changes. You can give yourself a reminder to add an edit summary by setting Preferences → Editing → Tick Prompt me when entering a blank edit summary. I know this is mentioned in the training and guidelines materials that were given to you as part of your project. DMacks (talk) 06:22, 26 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Next time I will do it Winwiwil123 (talk) 04:20, 28 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 12

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Hello, Winwiwil123! I'm so sorry for the late reply. I took a look at your article Bond energy and I think we can do with a bit of formatting:

  1. Add a link to the page Bond-dissociation energy perhaps in the text at the beginning ("...average value of the gas-phase bond dissociation energies (usually at a temperature...") and to the See also section.
  2. Change ΔfHº(R) to ΔHfº(R).
  3. Consider making Dº(R−X) = ΔfHº(R) + ΔfHº(X) – ΔfHº(RX) into a separate line for clarity.
  4. Please follow the formatting guidelines for section headings. Section headings should be in sentence case where only the first word is capitalized. That is, Standard Bond Energies and Super-Strong, Super-Modulus Materials should be changed to Standard bond energies and Super-strong, super-modulus materials. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style for more information.
  5. The text in the section Standard Bond Energies could be revised. Be sure the units are consistent. Also, you might want to add a more credible reference for the average bond dissociation enthalpies such as Huheey, pps. A-21 to A-34; T.L. Cottrell, The Strengths of Chemical Bonds, 2nd ed., Butterworths, London, 1958 and S. W. Benson, J. Chem. Educ. 42:502 (1965).
  6. For the last section: Super-strong, super-modulus materials, did you want Melting Temperature–Bond Energy Relation to be a subsection? It doesn't seem to be a complete sentence.
  7. And lastly, be sure there are no duplicate references.

Thank you very much for your hard work! Let me know if there is anything I can help you with. --SoonLorpai (talk) 07:07, 27 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Don't forget to make the font face consistent. Italic font should be strictly reserved for math variables. --Taweetham (talk) 01:27, 3 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Elsevier

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Elsevier is not a journal. Please recheck your work on Phenolphthalein carefully. --Taweetham (talk) 11:45, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed it already kub. Thank you kub. -- Winwiwil123 (talk) 18:51, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

J-stage

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J-stage is not a journal too. This is a serious mistake. Please carefully check all of references in Phenolphthalein. --Taweetham (talk) 12:28, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed it already kub. Thank you for pointing it out kub. -- Winwiwil123 (talk) 3:01, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
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This is not a journal too! --Taweetham (talk) 15:28, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed it already kub. -- Winwiwil123 (talk) 3:02, 24 February 2022 (UTC)

https

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Please use https instead of http whenever possible, for example, in your reference links. --Taweetham (talk) 06:46, 24 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I have only doi in my reference kub -- Winwiwil123 (talk) 3:03, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
Understood. It is springer that resolve the doi into http://link.springer.com/10.1007/PL00013491 --Taweetham (talk) 08:56, 24 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

แกล้งเพื่อนไม่ดี

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https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk%3APumin_Martin&type=revision&diff=1073789048&oldid=943655128 ฟ้าดินรู้เห็น --Taweetham (talk) 11:20, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

5555555 ขำ ขนาดผมยังลืมเลยว่าผมเคยไปเขียนอะไรไว้ 124.122.141.130 (talk) 15:01, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
จารย์ ภูมินเขาทำครบ 12 weeks แล้วครับ แต่ทำไมหน้าเขามีแค่ถึง week 8 อีกครับ Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:05, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
คำโว้วววโห้ววว (ถ้าอัพ gif ที่ไม่ใช่ ของตัวเองในนี้มีสิทธิ์โดนไหมครับ) Winwiwil123 (talk) 17:28, 13 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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