User talk:WinstonJewel/sandbox

Very good! A little clean up to do (don't leave things from the template like birth and death date in there if you aren't putting in the information), but this is coming along nicely. SarahEMC2 (talk) 12:35, 16 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Lists of plays and prose

Hi WinstonJewel. I've cleaned up the formatting for your writing and directing credits. If you want to make a bulleted list on wikipedia you can do so by starting a new line with an asterisk ("*"), like so:

One element
Another

If you look at the source for the page, you'll see there's no linebreak between the two. The Wikipedia parser recognizes that first character and creates an indent and linebreak without you having to do it manually.

The section that you have for plays could be improved a bit. I assume that it covers plays she wrote, but the text doesn't make that clear. I would recommend instead of separating them as bullet points you integrate them into the prose. That way we know when she wrote each play and what awards each play earned without scanning up and down in the text. All that content is already there, it just needs to be organized a bit. You don't even need to change the section name if you don't want to!

I hope this helps, Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:33, 17 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]