User talk:WilliamJE/Hoax

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Interesting they chose 1984 Rajneeshee bioterror attack as a see also for a couple reasons. First it was a deliberate bioterror attack thus planting uncertainty in the readers mind by association ("could it be intentional?"). Second, it was a home-grown attack, thus misdirection from thinking of any involvement by a foreign power. The whole piece is subtle, but ultimately not well executed. There are grammatical problems and some parts stick out as not sounding right, they are trying to sound like a professional news service but end up in the Uncanny Valley. -- GreenC 00:08, 14 March 2019 (UTC)