User talk:Wikipoetics125

July 2022

Your edit to Julia de Burgos has been removed in whole or in part, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without evidence of permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted material, including text or images from print publications or from other websites, without an appropriate and verifiable license. All such contributions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images—you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously, and persistent violators of our copyright policy will be blocked from editing. See Wikipedia:Copying text from other sources for more information. Magnolia677 (talk) 21:32, 31 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I removed a number of dead links from this page and replaced the links with live links and sources. Wikipoetics125 (talk) 22:10, 31 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

No, you copied text word-for-word. In you latest edits, you removed: "On June 28, 1953, Burgos left the home of a relative in Brooklyn, where she had been residing. She disappeared without leaving a clue as to where she went." Why? I reverted your latest edits. I checked one of the new sources you added and it did not support the text. Please stop your disruptive editing. Magnolia677 (talk) 10:42, 1 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

Yes, I removed the sentence "On June 28, 1953, Burgos left the home of a relative in Brooklyn, where she had been residing. She disappeared without leaving a clue as to where she went" because there is no source to support this. The note that was listed there, a blog post, does not actually say this.

I have absolutely no intention of being disruptive. I am a great admirer of Julia de Burgos's work and I am simply trying to improve the page by contributing to it. Can you tell me why you also removed the External Links to the biography "Becoming Julia de Burgos: The Making of a Puerto Rican Icon." Is it not appropriate to add links to published books?

I am new to Wikipedia editing and this is only the second page that I have contributed to. I'm just trying to improve the quality of the page.

Thanks. Wikipoetics125 (talk) 12:07, 1 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I have a concern about references #3 and #10. Neither of these links take you to content on Julia de Burgos.

I also have a concern about "On June 28, 1953, Burgos left the home of a relative in Brooklyn, where she had been residing. She disappeared without leaving a clue as to where she went". It is not supported by the reference. A source is needed here.

There has been a lot of excellent research on this writer. I'm concerned about the lack of sources and the inaccuracies on this page. She is one of Puerto Rico's most important poets. She deserves to have a more robust presence on this site. Wikipoetics125 (talk) 15:39, 1 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

August 2022

Your edit to Small Axe Project has been removed in whole or in part, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without evidence of permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted material, including text or images from print publications or from other websites, without an appropriate and verifiable license. All such contributions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images—you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously, and persistent violators of our copyright policy will be blocked from editing. See Wikipedia:Copying text from other sources for more information. You cannot copy-paste content into articles, like you did with the mission statement from http://smallaxe.net/ ~ lovkal (talk) 18:34, 1 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi Lovkal, thanks for your message. The material I added to small axe was not under copyright, although I did copy and paste it from a Word document that I created with the changes. I did include some quotes which are from the website and I added a source, but I understand if that isn't allowed. I'm still learning. Thank you! Wikipoetics125 (talk) 19:47, 1 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Inline tags

Thank you for identifying text at Julia de Burgos requiring greater verification. I have removed the extraneous text you added to identify such text.

Typically, a template in the form of a "tag" is used for problematic text. For example, text that is unsourced or poorly sourced could be tagged using "{{Citation needed|reason=Your explanation here|date=August 2022}}". This would automatically convert to a "citation needed" tag when your edit is saved. Please see WP:CITENEED, Template:Citation needed, and Template:Inline cleanup tags for details.

Other options to tagging include adding a source which supports the text (may require re-writing of text), or removing the problematic text.

The best place to experiment with tags and all other test edits is in your sandbox at User:Wikipoetics125/sandbox. Thank you. Magnolia677 (talk) 08:05, 2 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review – Sept 2024

Here I am adding comments to two sections of the article on Julia de Burgos: Julia de Burgos.

1. Later years

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Later in life, Burgos became romantically involved with Dr. Juan Isidro Jimenes Grullón, a Dominican physician. According to Grullón, many of her poems during that time were inspired by the love that she felt for him.

– I wonder where exactly this is mentioned. The interview Chiqui Vicioso had with him in Santo Domingo comes to mind, but I am unsure. The interview was published in a Dominican newspaper and later edited for her book "Julia de Burgos en Santo Domingo." Little attention has been given to that conversation, at least to my knowledge.

2. In music

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The third movement of Leonard Bernstein's Songfest: A Cycle of American Poems for Six Singers and Orchestra is a setting of Burgos' poem "A Julia de Burgos". Jack Gottlieb wrote, "In angry words (sung in Spanish) she expresses her defiance of the dual role she plays as a conventional woman and as a liberated woman-poet. (Her poem antedates by two decades the women's liberation movement.) The music is sharply rhythmic, and might well be underscoring for a bullfight."

Composer Awilda Villarini set de Burgos' work to music in her composition "Two Love Songs."

– There are other examples. For instance, Zoraida Santiago's homage to the poet, "Antología a Julia de Burgos" is important. The album includes 16 songs which are musicalized poems. I am sure there are many other examples, but Zoraida's is a central one (https://open.spotify.com/album/1tQucOi7zPYoG606DJqxuZ) in the musical afterlives of Julia. Wjburgosmatos11 (talk) 14:23, 18 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for this, @Wjburgosmatos11

It would be great to better develop this section on music. If you want to add a couple of sentences and references that would be great. Maybe we can do that next week when we meet Wikipoetics125 (talk) 17:14, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]