User talk:WegK
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[edit]https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flint_water_crisis
The first paragraph of the page could use some more citations because it goes throughout the whole intro describing the flint water crisis without a single one
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dakota_Access_Pipeline_protests
The first paragraph of the page doesn’t have any citations which it should. Some paragraphs could use more significant detail due to the fact that these key details can really help the reader of the article understand the seriousness of the issue
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Electronic_waste
This article could expand more on the effects of electronic waste on different countries and go more in depth, possible citing specific cases of people directly affected
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