User talk:Watkina
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[edit]Hello, Watkina, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:24, 26 January 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]Overall, I thought that the article had a lot of good information in it and was well organized for the most part. The sources were strong as well. Here are some suggestions that I had for the group as follows.
Maybe the results and assessments section and the revitalized in 2013 section could go before the public perspectives and criticisms section? The order of the information would then discuss the program’s overall effectiveness first and then it can be explained what people do not like about the program.
Some of the assessments seem like they are public perceptions of the program. Maybe some of the information from the results/assessments section could be moved to public perceptions/criticisms section. For example, “another report conducted by Northwestern University found that, after ten years of CAPS' implementation, both white and African-American residents felt a decreased fear of crime in their area” could be moved to the public perceptions section.
It might help to discuss in more detail what specific criticisms people have about the program.
Wikipedia mention in the peer review training to avoid making claims on behalf of unnamed groups or people. The article says “as noted by criminology scholars, policing strategies often get no rigorous evaluation or assessment, leading to lack of data and evidence regarding the efficacy of the program.” It feels like based off their guidelines, the wording of the sentence should be changed.
“Instead of an overall guide for the whole Police Department Caps had evolved into a bureaucratic program.” May need to be worded differently to avoid possible bias.
Reference 13- Clear path source could not be accessed.
Small formatting thing: Wording dates in the references as 18 February 2017 for example, makes the red date error lettering go away. Though that maybe time consuming to fix.Thomascovenant (talk) 14:14, 9 March 2017 (UTC)
Final Peer Review March 16th
[edit]Hi Watkina,
I just wanted to leave one final message since we both worked on the same Wiki page.
Looking back, I think we both did a great job of improving this article. I tried to change as much as I could without interfering with any of your major edits. Based on the feedback that we received, it seems like we touched on all of the topics/revisions that our classmates left as suggestions. If you have any other questions or edits that you would like to consider in the future, please do not hesitate to contact me! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Csamc (talk • contribs) 16:45, 16 March 2017 (UTC)