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Hello, Waritsara.tir, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few links to pages you might find helpful:

You may also want to complete the Wikipedia Adventure, an interactive tour that will help you learn the basics of editing Wikipedia. You can visit the Teahouse to ask questions or seek help.

Please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask for help on your talk page, and a volunteer should respond shortly. Again, welcome! --Taweetham (talk) 02:48, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 01

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Please complete online student training at https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students You must login and complete all five basic modules. (Wikipedia policies, ..., Finding your article) After completion of these module, we will be able to see that you have edited at least three pages on the English Wikipedia.

Special:Contributions/Waritsara.tir at this time shows that you have not finished:

  • sandbox [1] (N.B. Please do not click "Submit your draft for review!". The function is not applicable to our course.)
  • be bold [2]
  • talk page tutorial [3]

You need to be logged in on a desktop platform, so that your contributions are recorded under your account. The links above take you straight into the pages where you can launch interactive tutorials. We expect to see you create three new pages during the this training exercise. --Taweetham (talk) 02:38, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 02:05, 4 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 02

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General instruction
  • You are going to see history of pages on Wikipedia to learn how volunteers collaboratively develop content and media. We would like you to learn from the edits made by our students in the past terms. The list of terms, students and articles can be found at user:Taweetham/WEP.
  • All tasks must be answered by using Special:Diff. See Help:Diff for further detailed instructions and see an example below
Tasks
  1. Read WP:NOT. Find an example of student edit on an article AND warning message that the student received on his/her talk page.
  2. Read Wikipedia:Edit warring. Find an example of student edits on an article (it requires several edits to be an edit warring) AND warning that the student received on his/her talk page.
  3. Read WP:COPYVIO. Find an example of a student who has been warned about it on his/her talk page. Find an example (Wikipedia diff on an article) where copyrighted media (image, VDO or sound files) is deleted from Wikimedia Commons and removed from an article.

Please leave your answer below. (Leave a reply in this section of your talkpage.) --Taweetham (talk) 15:46, 3 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --SoonLorpai (talk) 18:48, 10 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 03

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Please propose a topic or two that you wish to write on Wikipedia. You should read all related articles/policies on Wikipedia and provide the following information.

  1. Your proposed article(s) (New or existing STUB article relating to a chemical compound, reaction, equipment or technique - or related to your major/interest. (see Category:Stub-Class Chemistry articles))
    • For new article, explain briefly why it passes WP:NOTE.
    • For existing topics, explain briefly the state/structure of the current article.
      • Is the structure & existing content appropriate?
        • If not, restructure or remove content as per WP:MOS and WP:NOT before you move to the next stage.
  2. Brief outline of your contributions to the article
    • In what section & what content
      • Make sure it belongs to the article and it is encyclopedic. See WP:NOT for things that should NOT be added.
      • Make sure that it is not redundant to existing articles. Use Google search "site:wikipedia.org" rather than Wikipedia search.
    • References for the article
    • Media files (photo/VDO/drawing) to be used in the article.
      • You may suggest plan to create your own work and upload to Wikimedia Commons
      • You may use existing media on Wikimedia Commons. Use Google image search "site:wikimedia.org" rather than Wikimedia Commons search.
  3. Examples/template/related articles that you will use as a model to develop your nominated article.
    • In terms of WP:MOS/formatting - your article will have similar style/format/tone to these articles.
    • In terms of content - your article will link to or will be linked from these articles.

Please leave your answer below. (Leave a reply in this section of your talkpage.) --SoonLorpai (talk) 18:48, 10 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

1. My proposed topic (Existing topic): Atheronals

  • The state of the current article seem to be incomplete because the article only contain a brief description about the Atheronals.
  • I think the structure and existing content is quite appropriate since there is Article name. Moreover, the picture of the Atheronals for the both types contain captions and there is also no warning about the copyright violation.

2. Brief outline of the contributions to the article

  • I will add a new section that emphasise and describe more about the reaction between cholesterol and ozone. This section would be called "Process in forming Atheronols (Ozonolysis)".
  • References for the article
    • Tomono, S., Miyoshi, N., Shiokawa, H., Iwabuchi, T., Aratani, Y., Higashi, T., … Ohshima, H. (2011). Formation of cholesterol ozonolysis products in vitro and in vivo through a myeloperoxidase-dependent pathway. Journal of lipid research, 52(1), 87–97. doi:10.1194/jlr.M006775 https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2999934/
    • Tomono, Susumu & Miyoshi, Noriyuki & Sato, Kazuaki & Ohba, Yoshihiro & Ohshima, Hiroshi. (2009). Formation of cholesterol ozonolysis products through an ozone-free mechanism mediated by the myeloperoxidase-H2O2-chloride system. Biochemical and biophysical research communications. 383. 222-7. 10.1016/j.bbrc.2009.03.155 https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/19345674

3. Examples/template/related articles that I will use as a model to develop my nominated article

  • My article will have similar style/formatting/tone to this article:

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Waritsara.tir (talk • contribs) 12:23, 15 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Teetee taw (talk) 15:49, 17 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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Thanks for your hard work. Keep trying! Taweetham (talk) 09:19, 12 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 04

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Your topic is approved and added to the course page. Please develop the proposal into the first draft in your sandbox.

  • For existing article, you may copy some parts of the existing article to your sandbox to see how revision/integration of content would work. You will copy the code back to the article at later stage.
  • For new article, you may want to copy parts of a template article to your sandbox to see what sections are necessary. The sandbox will be moved to the article namespace at later stage. Please do not click "Submit your draft for review!". The function is not applicable to our course.

In all cases, do not copy more than what is necessary. For example, do not copy any categories to your sandbox. --Teetee taw (talk) 15:49, 17 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your work. Please quickly revise your work accordingly:

  1. WP:MOS: Internal links are missing. I have added some of them as an example for you. After you have added the links, you will understand that part of your work can be removed as it has been explained elsewhere.
  2. WP:REF: You will need to cite more sources to support three paragraphs that you have added. Citation can be done by {{cite journal}}.
  3. WP:NOT/Wikipedia:Writing_better_articles#Tone: Make sure that you write in an encyclopedic tone.

You have until the end of today (25 May UTC+7) to revise your work to the standard. --Taweetham (talk) 01:57, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done A reference may be used more than once in a article. You need to provide a name for the reference in the ref tag. When the ref is used for the second time, you will be able to call the reference by that name. --Taweetham (talk) 04:12, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 05

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Your work has been reviewed. Majority of the content/formatting is ok. Please carefully move encyclopedic part of your sandbox to article namespace so that the general public can see it. Here are some tips to help you complete the transition to online editing.

  1. Content/Formatting policies
  2. Technicalities
    • Unlike sandbox, all edits will be public immediately and it is important to make sure that all of your edits are acceptable. You may use preview button and provide edit summary to help you.
    • Any "page save" on Wikipedia even outside article namespace is permanently recorded and can be retrieved by the public. Please think carefully before you click save and before you revert other people edits. No work is lost but only the latest version of the page is shown to the public. Deletion of pages (or versions of pages) is only possible by admins if it falls under Wikipedia:Deletion policy. You can request admins to do deletion or other prescribed tasks should the need arises.
    • You may want to set watchlist and notifications so that you can catch up with changes made to your article and your talk page by other editors.
  3. Community interactions
    • You will be interacting with other volunteers when you make edits on the article namespace. Please respect other users in the community and assume good faith.
    • If your work is reverted or modified in any other ways, do not engage in a edit war. Rather use discussion page of your article to settle issues.
    • You may be blocked from Wikipedia for failure to observe community rules.

We hope you enjoy seeing product of your hard work read by many people in the years to come. --Taweetham (talk) 04:12, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done - Please check out Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking. --Taweetham (talk) 01:12, 1 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 06

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A volunteer SoonLorpai (talk · contribs) has accepted to be your reviewer. The reviewer will be in contact with you shortly. --Taweetham (talk) 01:09, 1 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, Yelly! I'm so sorry for getting to you so late. I am glad you have chosen a rather interesting topic! Let's walk through this point by point:

1. Ozonolysis
  • If you have not yet taken organic chemistry I (ICCH221), then you may not be familiar with ozonolysis. To put it very simply and in no chemical terms, you're just cutting a double bond in half and inserting oxygens at the cut.
  • Try to compare the structure of cholesterol to atheronal-A and spot the difference!
  • Get ahold of any organic chemistry textbook (Ajarn Pakorn uses Vollhardt & Schore which should be available in the MUIC library) and I'm pretty sure they cover ozonolysis somewhere. The mechanism is rather complicated and even in organic 1 we do not expect you to understand that. However, if you are curious or are thinking of inserting a figure of the mechanism as your media contribution, catch me sometime and I can help you with that.
2. Some Formatting
  • I think that the information you have added under "Ozonolysis of cholesterol" is beyond the title itself. Perhaps you can separate them into different sections.
  • I have just noticed you have made corrections to the "introduction" of the article in your sandbox. Add them to the article!
3. Figures
  • Think about what kinds of media contribution (figures, videos, etc.) you may want to add to this article. Be creative and artistic!
4. Recommended References
I did a (rather lengthy) internet search and found a few references I believe is interesting. If you want to, you can read through the entire thing, but I personally would not. The methods and experimental section in general could be skipped. If the abstract makes no sense, begin with the introduction. It should give you a good enough background for you to be able to vaguely picture what is going on:
This paper talks about the role atheronals play in atherosclerosis (a disease where you have plaque build up along the walls of the arteries, clogging them up). The introduction gives a good overview and you can follow their references for further explanation.
You mentioned atherosclerosis in the third paragraph of the section and I think that this could supplement what you have already done :)

Keep in mind that you don't have to do everything I have listed by this week, so don't feel overwhelmed. They are merely suggestions, and you have the option to accept/reject them and come up with what you think should be your next steps. Let me know if I can help with anything! --SoonLorpai (talk) 15:45, 5 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 07

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For your information, the grading is based on the criteria below: Wikipedia contributions must meet the minimum quantity requirement to be graded.

Quantity
  • We generally expect at least 5,000 characters (counted by xtools's authorship attribution) to the assigned article unless you upload media file(s) and/or help contribute to classmate article(s).
  • If media are created by you, uploaded to the Wikimedia Commons and used in the article, either 1,000 or 2,000 or 3,000 characters credit will be given, regardless of the number of media uploaded.
    • 1,000 characters credit will be given to sound files(s).
    • 1,000 characters credit will be given to image(s).
    • 2,000 characters credit will be given to video(s).
  • If you help classmate(s) to edit their articles or create media files for uses in classmates' articles, up to 1,000 bytes of your contributions may be counted. Your classmate(s) must remain in the Wikipedia assignment program at the end of the term so that the articles can be counted.
  • All of the work must be created by you and recorded under your username.
  • No outstanding WP:COPVIO issues for both text and media.

The work will be graded based on quality and process criteria:

Quality

Learn from similar articles on Wikipedia (preferably higher quality than the article you are working on).

  • Structure
  • Content
    • All information are relevant to the article and written in encyclopedic tone. (Understand WP:NOT.)
    • Text are clearly supported by reliable sources. (Follow WP:REF.)
    • Do final clean up and proofreading.
  • Formatting & housekeeping
    • Formatting (citation e.g. {{cite web}}}, {{cite journal}} and {{cite book}}, heading styles, bullet/numbered point, font face, table, position/layout/caption of images etc.)
    • Other issues (course tag on talk page of your article, make sure you add categories to your article(s) and media)
    • File names in Wikimedia commons or reference name in the article should be sensible and helpful for other editors.
    • Unnecessary files, pages e.g. redirection are nominated for deletion.
    • To produce desired formatting, learn from source codes of other articles on Wikipedia or ask classmates/other Wikipedians.
Process
  • Complete the assignment on time.
  • Understand Wikipedia articles and policies by independent reading.
  • Take appropriate action on comments given by the community/instructor.
  • Provide edit summary for every edit on the article namespace.
  • If conflict arises, do not engage in edit war. Use talk page/discussion pages to resolve the issue.
  • Help improve classmates' articles.
  • Thank other editors/reviewers of your article.

--Taweetham (talk) 05:49, 12 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 08

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For your information, the list below may be useful to you:

  • final clean up and proofreading before grading.
  • clear outstanding work/issues.
  • thank other editors of your article. (Log in, check the article's history and click thank.)
  • create your user page. (optional)
  • Check list
  1. Do you meet the quantitative requirement? See the course page for more information.
  2. Are your contributions recorded under your account? See a page history or see the file page on commons to verify.
  3. Do you have categories for BOTH your article and media files?
  4. Do you have sufficient links to and from your article? Check the links to your article by clicking on "What links here" on the left-hand menu. It is useful to have your article included in some templates, for example, Template:Laboratory_equipment.
  5. Do your media files clearly demonstrate the subject matter? Do your files have a sensible name? (You can request a name change at Wikimedia Commons by Clicking on "More" --> "Move".)
  6. Do you have appropriate media caption in your article and appropriate description/license information on Wikimedia Commons page?
  7. Does your article follow the "Manual of Style" and properly referenced?
  8. Check the talk page of your article. See if page issues are addressed.

--Taweetham (talk) 01:46, 18 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 12

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Congratulations! You have completed the work and the grade is now available on Canvas. --Taweetham (talk) 08:32, 16 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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