User talk:WSH0927
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[edit]Dear Wu Shuhan,
I have reviewed your article. And after reading it, I believe you wrote it clearly and concisely. Also, you already included some excellent source references. On the other hand, I think it would be preferable if the writing was more specific. Since Luo's 1987 journey to Japan is mentioned in the "Occupation" section, I believe it would be better if you included the explanation for his trip. Additionally, several of the grammatical spellings are incorrect, and it's unclear to me if Luo Yusheng is a male or a woman. He is referred to as "he" and is characterized as a male in the opening phrase of the "Early life" section. Nevertheless, he is referred as a woman in the next phrase. "At the age of 9, he paid a visit to his teacher Su Huanting" is likewise unclear in this statement.
Since everything else is excellent, I believe that to be sufficient. I hope my advice will help you improve your post.
Kindly Regards,
Darlene Audrey Darleneaudrey (talk) 08:20, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
April 2024
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Hello, I'm Waxworker. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Li Qin (actress), but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Waxworker (talk) 19:50, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
May 2024
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Please do not add or change content, as you did at Bai Lu (actress), without citing a reliable source. Please review the guidelines at Wikipedia:Citing sources and take this opportunity to add references to the article. Thank you. Waxworker (talk) 12:51, 8 May 2024 (UTC)