User talk:Vpbklyn

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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:William Habib Bardawil

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A tag has been placed on Draft:William Habib Bardawil, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Hello Vpbklyn -- Thanks for indicating that you have a connection with the subject. I have declined this deletion request to allow you more time to improve the article; I fear at the moment it reads as if it were written by a Large Language Model. What is most needed is reliable independent sources that cover the subject in depth, such as books, articles in newspapers, magazines or academic journals, or similar. I suggest that you assemble at least two or three such sources and then write the article based entirely on what they say, rather than what you know personally. If you need help with editing or referencing, then the Teahouse is a friendly forum for newcomers. Regards, Espresso Addict (talk) 00:50, 25 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: William Habib Bardawil (November 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AlphaBetaGamma were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 00:54, 25 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Vpbklyn! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 00:54, 25 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi- thanks for your feedback! I'll revise the entry and resubmit. Vpbklyn (talk) 16:02, 25 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]