User talk:Vickeroodle/SandboxSeaSpray

Sea Spray Peer Review

I think your introductory paragraph should talk about why we care about sea spray.
You don't have much linked, and I think it could be cool to link certain concepts (if you can) such as "Sea Spray Aerosols"
Make a references header and link your references
Make sure you cite every sentence
I would break up your larger sections into ones to have subsections, esp. with the formation section
Link words or phrases instead of putting them in parentheses (see: sensible heat and latent heat)
Doesn't seem to be an order of significance here. Is climate interaction arguably more important than ecology? I'm, not sure but if you think it is I would put it before ecology
I think if you keep talking about SSA it might be useful to spell it out when put in various sections.