User talk:VHodges90/sandbox
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[edit]- + Lots of good material!
- + Good length
- + Stub material imported, but not yet integrated
- + Material from all three of you—good!
- Suggestions for improvement:
- Integrate the stub material into the main article. There's some good stuff in there that would benefit your text.
- Re-check your organization. For example, why is the information about Augustus the Strong in the Artwork section rather than the History section? Porcelain manufacture seems like a major part of the castle's history, after all.
- Cite Everything ☺. You appear to have the sources; they're just not attached directly to the material they supplied.