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  • + Lots of good material!
  • + Good length
  • + Stub material imported, but not yet integrated
  • + Material from all three of you—good!
  • Suggestions for improvement:
    • Integrate the stub material into the main article. There's some good stuff in there that would benefit your text.
    • Re-check your organization. For example, why is the information about Augustus the Strong in the Artwork section rather than the History section? Porcelain manufacture seems like a major part of the castle's history, after all.
    • Cite Everything ☺. You appear to have the sources; they're just not attached directly to the material they supplied.

Phbrownacmorg (talk) 23:50, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]