User talk:Usernamekiran/sandbox/Collaborations between Central Intelligence Agency and American Mafia
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[edit]@Ad Orientam, Location, and SNUGGUMS: @Ad Orientem: your suggestion regarding this draft making in to an article will be appreciated a lot. Thanks. :-) —usernamekiran(talk) 22:11, 13 May 2017 (UTC)
- From a glance, I can say "guys" from the "connected guys" section title is inappropriate tone, and something else to fix is how the start of the second paragraph is italicized for no discernible reason. Snuggums (talk / edits) 22:13, 13 May 2017 (UTC)
- thanks CuddlyGums. Yes, i kept the language "friendly" while the draft is in first phase. We get to call them cool names lol. the italicised content is repeated content. I need combine them two, n after CE, place them in appropriate place. are there any more documents released after 2007 which might show relationship between agency and mafia? Fhe current article isnt moving ahead from mid 70s. —usernamekiran(talk) 22:25, 13 May 2017 (UTC)
- True; draft standards definitely are more lenient than mainspace standards. I'm not familiar enough with the content to say how much detail should be included. Snuggums (talk / edits) 22:33, 13 May 2017 (UTC)
- We can add anything that has been released CIA or NSA or some govt body, if the data is not "controversial" we can add it here. As long as it is in the scope of this article. —usernamekiran(talk) 22:40, 13 May 2017 (UTC)
- True; draft standards definitely are more lenient than mainspace standards. I'm not familiar enough with the content to say how much detail should be included. Snuggums (talk / edits) 22:33, 13 May 2017 (UTC)
- thanks CuddlyGums. Yes, i kept the language "friendly" while the draft is in first phase. We get to call them cool names lol. the italicised content is repeated content. I need combine them two, n after CE, place them in appropriate place. are there any more documents released after 2007 which might show relationship between agency and mafia? Fhe current article isnt moving ahead from mid 70s. —usernamekiran(talk) 22:25, 13 May 2017 (UTC)
(edit conflict) i saw your edit on numberblocks, CuddlyGums, and I was sort of bored at that time, i started to read your userpage. Man its awesome! You must have amassed so much knowledge by now! Amazing. I hope i get to work on something with you, Ad, and Loaction. Thanks again. See you around. :-) —usernamekiran(talk) 22:40, 13 May 2017 (UTC)
- I'm not sure this article is necessary. As far as I know, all "collaborations between the Central Intelligence Agency and American Mafia" occurred in the context of the Castro assassination plots, and Wikipedia currently has two articles on this: Cuban Project (which is essentially Operation Mongoose) and Assassination attempts on Fidel Castro. I think Assassination attempts on Fidel Castro should be rolled into a larger subsection of Cuban Project. -Location (talk) 02:04, 14 May 2017 (UTC)