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So far you use a lot of the first source, but I am guessing you plan on using more of the next ones going forth. Having a lot from one source is a-ok as long as you eventually use as much as you can from each source. A handful of sentences can honestly be changed in order to increase fluidity and honestly, word count. For example "As per biblical tradition, both Mary and Elizabeth were pregnant during this visit". Could be changed to "Both Mary and Elizabeth were pregnant during this visit, as is typically depicted in similar biblical artistic pieces." It is highly neutral as well, so you did good. Your structure and the rest were amazing. Your sources seem reliable too. DJAISSA (talk) 03:37, 15 October 2024 (UTC)