User talk:Urban walker/sandbox

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Good start

This is a nice start. I had a couple suggestions:

First, this doesn't really feel to me like a standalone article to me. What I think I will suggest you do is take the content of this article and move it as a subsection into the article on Park or maybe somewhere else you find that is more appropriate.
Second, I think you should work to integrate the references into the text a little bit. It's a great start and the references look fantastic.

I think this would be a very nice addition to the Park article. —mako ๛ 00:34, 18 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]