User talk:Turtle732
Ways to improve Tom Spiegel
[edit]Thanks for creating Tom Spiegel.
A New Page Patroller Rosguill just tagged the page as having some issues to fix, and wrote this note for you:
The article is well written, but I'm concerned about the section organization, particularly the fact that the two sections describing his primary career (Columbia Savings and Loan, Investments) are split by a much longer section about his trial. I'd encourage you to consider merging the two career-oriented sections.
The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can reply over here and ping me. Or, for broader editing help, you can talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.
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signed, Rosguill talk 17:49, 31 October 2018 (UTC)