User talk:Tsoram

Tsoram Thank you for your edit of my edit of politician jim Fitzpatrick. I am new to wiki editing, though understand objectivity. I included "However" in my post because Mr Fitzpatrick is well known for his support for the Iraq war and I was surprised that there was no mention of this on his page, which suggests a lack of objectivity in it's composition, and perhaps a biased wiki entry. Not only was there no mention of his support for the Iraq war, the first paragraph suggested that he was opposed to bombing of middle eastern countries, e.g. Syria. Therefore the use of "However" was intended to counterpose the suggestion of non intervention with a significant fact on the matter. Whilst I don't intend to re-edit, I'd be interested in your views. TeddyTeddy Watson (talk) 18:09, 4 June 2015 (UTC)