User talk:Truffula Tree/sandbox
Hey Kat, This looks like a great page. The image you added works very well. You only have sections talking about the closure areas, which look good, but I think you might be able to add another paragraph about the impacts of these closed areas? Maybe, what the effects of the closures are on the surrounding land and people. Additionally you could add more information from 2015 and 16 about if the closures are working as intended and if the gulf is showing improvements.P Bobodyne (talk) 18:48, 25 March 2016 (UTC)
Hi Gato Wow it is looking really nice! It might be good to explain a bit more about what a closed area is and how the areas are enforced. More general information at the beginning explaining closed areas and maybe Maine's habitat and current fisheries would be interesting. References look good. Image is fantastic. Perhaps try and rephrase some sentences to break up the same sentence format for each section. I agree with Peter that you should consider adding section about the impacts of these areas. Hope this helps <3 MarineBiologistLaura (talk) 18:56, 25 March 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review part 2
[edit]Hey Kat, I think that this article is looking really good! Aside from adding a few more sections about the observed effects of these closed areas, I think that all you have left to do is to add a few outside links that direct to this page, maybe pages that have information about Maine, or Maine Gulfs, or Conservation or any other Marine Closed Areas. P Bobodyne (talk) 18:51, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review part 2
[edit]Hi Kat,
I like the changes you've made. I second what Peter said but I think you should also add an infobox under the image if possible!