User talk:Tromecp154
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[edit]Hello, Tromecp154, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:38, 15 November 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]You have a really good start to the edit on Geno's Steak! What I recommend is that the section is labelled the Iconic Nature of Geno's but there doesn't seem to be any material regarding how Geno's is iconic. Perhaps rename the section to Famous People Who Visited Geno's. Perhaps to make the article "beefier," (no pun intended) maybe add some information about the history of the place; there doesn't seem to be much information on the history and I'm sure that you can find some historical information online somewhere. Maybe some more names could suffice too, because right now the list of two people is slightly underwhelming. And I'm sure more than only 2 people visited Geno's in the entirety of its history. Also perhaps hyperlinking the article regarding Saric and Trump to slightly adding readability. Also maybe switch the order of the two names since Trump visited Geno's before Saric. Our stance on the information so far is neutral, so that's good. Overall, nice job so far, but I think there is a lot of potential information online that you utilize to help you in your journey. DurrDude (talk) 05:16, 19 November 2018 (UTC)