User talk:Trent.char/sandbox
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You are definitely on the right track to editing this article. I think all your additions are helpful. To expand, I would add more sources, include the second source you already listed at the beginning.
2607:FB90:21C3:DA21:2CBB:8D17:CE43:67B3 (talk) 22:19, 14 October 2016 (UTC)