User talk:ToshaDuncan
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:42, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
Diana's peer review
[edit]Dianadixi (talk) 15:55, 3 April 2019 (UTC)In your article Yuba-Bear Hydroelectric Project, clear structure and reliable sources are worth noting in the first place. You develop a coherent description of the issue, starting with geomorphological features of the region, then turning to consistent analysis of the project itself, element by element, and ending with overview of supplemental projects coexisting with YBHP. This approach to structure is highly sensible and intuitive. All the sources are taken from official governmental and public sites, or peer-reviewed scholarly articles, nothing to be improved here. The content is almost exclusively neutral; I found only one insignificant case which can be attributed as judgmental, “an impressive 145,000 acre-feet of water storage” in the History section. I would not assess the lead section, as it was taken unchanged from the original Wikipedia article which you upgraded. At the same time you can elaborate the lead subsection that you created for the section Yuba-Bear Hydroelectric Project. In this section, you describe such its elements as Bowman Development, Dutch Flat No. 2 Development, Chicago Park Development, and Rollins Development. I think you should briefly mention them in the lead for this section, because it was unclear to me how exactly these four capacities are interrelated. Also, the first sentence of the section relates to YBHP history and can be moved to a corresponding section. The title of the section can be modified as well, since in its current form it simply duplicates the title of the entire article. I would also strongly recommend you to work on better balance of coverage. For instance, in the section Geomorphology of the Region you pay twice more attention to the Yuba River Watershed, compared to the Bear River watershed. In the section Yuba-Bear Hydroelectric Project, the description of Rollins Development takes disproportionately small volume compared to other elements. Finally, for final sections describing supplemental facilities, I would recommend you to keep more uniform approach to their representation. Currently, Drum-Spaulding Project is described with bullet points containing mostly specific quantitative data, while Yuba River Development Project is described with full sentences in a narrative from. From my subjective perspective, the latter approach is more opportune for an average reader. On the whole, the article on Yuba-Bear Hydroelectric Project demonstrates strong adherence to the standards established for encyclopedia articles, with rigorous approach to data accuracy and representation clarity which I will definitely incorporate while working with my own article. Apparent shortcomings are relatively insignificant and easily rectified.
Dianadixi (talk) 15:55, 3 April 2019 (UTC)dianadixi (talk) 08:54 1 April 2019 (UTC) Diana
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