User talk:Tommyren

Your submission at Articles for creation: Cluelessness (November 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ktkvtsh was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The tone occasionally drifts from neutral to speculative. Additionally, the part on ripple effects are overly technical, making the content harder to follow for a general audience. Also there are numerous statements that are repeated unnecessarily.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Ktkvtsh (talk) 02:04, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Tommyren! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Ktkvtsh (talk) 02:04, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]