User talk:Tomflock/sandbox

Good information! Just find a way to maybe make the writing slightly more professional.Eacoughlin (talk) 18:41, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Good layout and organized well. I found one grammatical error under Patrol.. "A patrol is a grouping boys who work to..." I'm assuming you meant to say either "a group of boys" or "a grouping of boys" Sclark9110 (talk) 18:47, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]