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Dwight Lauderdale
Toby, I saw your comment on Dwight Lauderdale Talk. Thanks! I'll clean that up. I did ask for peer reivew and I have an RFC already on this. Thanks KoshVorlon (talk)19:29, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
- Update on "Dwight Lauderdale"
- Toby, okay, I made the changes you mentioned. I DID change "started out" to "began a career as", however I did not change "wound up" to "evolved to", that sounded a bit archaic, I DID however change it to a more neutral (and less slang) "and became". Take a look and see what you think.
- Thanks for your feedback KoshVorlon (talk) 19:15, 25 November 2008 (UTC)