User talk:Tmm113/New sandbox

Khuynh96's Peer Review

Your article is well written so far. Your intro is clear, and straightforward. There are relevant hyperlinks that will further support your article. The overall tone of this article is not too skewed or projecting your own biases into it. In other words, your article's tone is consistently neutral. I feel like you could expand on different types of punches, like you already did for #1 and #2.

Looking forward to see the final product!