User talk:Tingtingou/sandbox
peer review
[edit]The draft is already pretty well-structured, with a informative leading paragraph and segments of biography and career. All the basic information on Mary Garrett is covered in a fairly detailed manner, especially in the biography section. There are some overlapping information between the biography and career section. It would be nice if the career section could expand more on these areas, adding more detailed information to supplement the what was already mentioned in the biography section.