User talk:TimTom05

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:56, 1 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This article has some good information, however it is missing a lot. A strong leading paragraph explaining the content that is in the article is necessary for a strong article.  The first paragraph should be under its own subheading. There should also be subsection about the history of corruption in Botswana. A paragraph detailing the effects of corruption on the country could make a stronger article. Overall, the edits you made to the article were valuable to its neutrality.Sheridanstills (talk) 05:29, 24 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review

I left a peer review of your article here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TimTom05/Corruption_in_Botswana/Whook17_Peer_Review Whook17 (talk) 03:05, 25 November 2019 (UTC)Whook17[reply]