User talk:Tictactrac
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[edit]Hello, Tictactrac, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:19, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
Vincent's Peer review
[edit]I am reviewing User:Tictactrac's article on the Combat Veteran's Motorcycle Association. They key idea of the Articles is the explanation of the Association giving a brief explanation of what it is and the different classes used there. The main issue with the article is the lack of information as it gives very brief information about the group. In order to improve the article, I would first add more background information on the Association such as how it was founded or talking about the particular bylaws for the group. You can also include how what sponsors the Association has and talk about some the different charities they support. Hope this helped. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vamendolia (talk • contribs) 23:30, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
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[edit]i have no clue what im doing, or why wikipedia is relivant.
Assignment 8
[edit]peer review daniels article
drew_carver1's Peer Review of Tictactrac's Article
[edit]The article that was chosen was the Combat Veteran Motorcycle Association(CVMA). When I first saw Tictactrac chosen article I had noticed that it was probably a great article to learn how to contribute. It is a fairly small article that most likely could be improved upon or could still have much more information added to it with the right amount of research. It may be more difficult to find information considering it seems to consist of small, inclusive groups through out the country, but the article could add some of the charity events that they have participated in, or where this organization tends to hold there meetings. They could possibly just be a group of men and woman that meet up at any location they feel like at the moment. There is a link to the website that describes some more information, but I think it would be better to also have it on the wiki. There could also add some more pictures, including the one of the president of the group if there is one online. There could be a link to there online store, to help with convenience also. These are just some of the few things I could think of that would make for a more detailed article.