User talk:Thyphoon7979

ICCH224

Please complete online student training at https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students by Friday 12th May. You must login and complete the three basic modules. After completion of these module, we will be able to see that you have edited three pages:

talk page tutorial
sandbox
be bold

Your username is now listed on our course page: Education_Program:Mahidol_University_International_College/ICCH224_(2016-17T3) --Taweetham (talk) 11:09, 5 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please complete this assignment by the end of today. Special:Contributions/Thyphoon7979 at this time shows that you have not finished:

talk page tutorial
sandbox
be bold

You need to be logged in, so that your contributions are recorded under your account. --Taweetham (talk) 09:42, 12 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please complete this assignment by the end of today. Special:Contributions/Thyphoon7979 at this time shows that you have not finished:

sandbox [1]

You need to be logged in, so that your contributions are recorded under your account. --Taweetham (talk) 01:57, 13 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for completing the student training, please propose a few topics that you wish to write on Wikipedia. You should read all related articles on Wikipedia and draft your new article(s) or revision to existing article(s) in your sandbox. --Taweetham (talk) 01:57, 13 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

We are looking forward to seeing

Your proposed topic(s)
Brief outline of your contributions to the article
References for the article and sources of media files (photo/VDO/drawing) to be used in the article.

in your sandbox by Friday 19th May. There will be a few reminders before the deadline. Should you have any questions, please feel free to ask. --Taweetham (talk) 02:26, 13 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This is a reminder that you have work due on Friday 19th May. Please start writing on your sandbox as soon as possible. --Taweetham (talk) 05:20, 18 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please study the article Blue bottle experiment carefully before proposing to edit it. -- Taweetham (talk) 00:39, 19 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please provide more details for your proposal containing

Your proposed topic(s)
Brief outline of your contributions to the article
References for the article and sources of media files (photo/VDO/drawing) to be used in the article.

by the end of today. --Taweetham (talk) 03:15, 20 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I have read other people's experiment, so can I do the different color too? --— Preceding unsigned comment added by Thyphoon7979 (talk • contribs) 03:39, 21 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It is best to stick to your topic. However, if you finish one topic, you can move on to the next. --Taweetham (talk) 04:00, 21 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Am I doing good now? because I have done the air consumption part, so can I add other parts more or what should I do next? Thank you --— Preceding unsigned comment added by Thyphoon7979 (talk • contribs) 05:03, 21 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

You will need inline citations. Please refer to suggested training modules on Education_Program:Mahidol_University_International_College/ICCH224_(2016-17T3). --Taweetham (talk) 05:11, 21 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please check for me again. Thank you, I have added a reference from the chemistry journal. What do I have to edit or do next? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Thyphoon7979 (talk • contribs) 07:44, 21 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please verify if you add a proper reference material. I do not think that the reference support your claim.
You may try to combine the three photos into one using GIMP or other software.
What the article is lacking at this moment is the reaction schemes. It will help your other parts of writing later on by referring to the scheme.

--Taweetham (talk) 08:26, 21 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Can Ajarn check for me again if that's what you want for me to do... The mechanisms and reactions. Thank you --— Preceding unsigned comment added by Thyphoon7979 (talk • contribs) 11:26, 21 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'll send you a few papers to read. Don't rush to write. You need to understand your subject of write and has a clear picture of the structure of your final product before you write. --Taweetham (talk) 00:49, 22 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Blue bottle experiment

You are drafting revisions (>= 500 bytes) to an existing article in your sandbox by Friday 26th May. In order to do so, you have to thoroughly read the existing article and plan your revisions in your sandbox. It is easiest to start with only an addition of content. However, you may copy the existing article to your sandbox to test your edit if you plan a complicated copyedit. Please pay attention to Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Chemistry and learn from similar articles, Category:Chemistry_classroom_experiments. Make sure that you article has an encyclopedic tone. Feel free to ask if you need any help. --Taweetham (talk) 01:29, 21 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please revise your draft as discussed during the meetup. --Taweetham (talk) 10:40, 25 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please make sure you have a proper redox reaction. --Taweetham (talk) 00:54, 26 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

By Friday the 2nd of June, you should make your writing public on the article namespace. You can copy your draft from sanndbox into the target article. Please make sure to provide sensible edit summary for your change. You may may several edits - one section at a time - to reduce possible mistakes. --Taweetham (talk) 00:53, 27 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please continue your work on the article. There are a few points to improve.

reorganize the content of the article to be more encyclopedic and more informative
replace lower quality image with a high quality image.

Please complete this by Friday the 9th of June. --Taweetham (talk) 06:26, 3 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please make your edit on the public page by Friday the 9th of June. --Taweetham (talk) 05:23, 9 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please refer to the work to be done this week on the course page. Specific comments for the article are

Please carefully proofread your article. There are a number of serious inaccuracies in the text and the scheme.
You have uploaded too many files on Wikimedia commons. https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=Special:ListFiles/Thyphoon7979&ilshowall=1 Please request for speedy deletion ({{SD}}) for all of your unusable files.

--Taweetham (talk) 07:38, 10 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

m:Meetup/Mahidol_University/10

You are invited to a Wikipedia Meetup on Thursday 25th to help with your assignment. Please sign up at the link above if you wish to come. Food will be provided. --Taweetham (talk) 08:08, 21 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Meetup on June 2

Hi Thyphoon7979! You’re invited to the Wikipedia meetup on June 2 at 11.00. I will be there in case you need help with the assignment. Please click here for more information. Cheers! --Athikhun.suw (talk) 09:28, 28 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Final Reminder

Hi Thyphoon7979. We are approaching the very final weeks of the course. FYI, I have posted the grading criteria here. Please follow them very carefully. Message me or leave me an email if you have any questions. Good luck! —Athikhun.suw (talk) 05:42, 18 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Tomorrow will be the last day you have the opportunity to polish up your work. Please me reminded that contributions after June 23 (UTC) won’t be considered for grading. FYI, please read very carefully the grading criteria here. Lastly, thank you for your participation in the Wikipedia assignment. Best of luck! —Athikhun.suw (talk) 03:27, 22 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (September 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by GreenMeansGo was:

This submission seems to be a test edit and not an article worthy of an encyclopedia. Please use the sandbox for any editing tests, but do not submit for review until you have an article that you want reviewed for inclusion in Wikipedia. Thank you.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to User:Korn966/sandbox and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

GMG ^talk 14:58, 29 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Thyphoon7979, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! GMG ^talk 14:58, 29 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]