User talk:Thuydo1999
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:42, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
I have sent you a note about a page you started
[edit]Hello, Thuydo1999
Thank you for creating Girl Scouts Troop 6000.
User:Joel B. Lewis, while examining this page as a part of our page curation process, had the following comments:
Hi Thuydo, thanks for writing this interesting article on a notable and valuable organization. I have one criticism of the article, which is that after the edits of User:Briqnnaxx in April, it is written and structured in a way that puts too much emphasis on the founders (Burgess and Van Bramer) in comparison with the subject (the troop itself). As a result, it feels a lot like a WP:Coatrack. I will make some attempts to improve the situation, and I hope you will, as well.
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